Lovely story, and I hope you don't stop there :)
Maybe add some variation to the daughters' clothes, it's a little strange for a 16-year-old to wear the same clothes as an 11-year-old. Still, besides that, I'd love to read more about the girls' games with "Mrs. Folsom". Especially the details of ...
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- 4 years ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
- Topic: Mrs Folsom comes to visit F/Ffff
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